Studio Brief 2 - Spread 4

I started by fitting the text into the initial layout

I came up with in the thumbnails. From this far

out there doesn't seem to be anything particularly

wrong with it, but from closer up, because of the

limited width in the 4 column grid, a lot of rivers

developed in the text. Not only this, but the space

for the quote makes it slightly confusing as to

how you should follow the text. The format of the

quote and text on the right side works a lot better

in my opinion, so this is something I'm going to

address, as well as to fill out the Handglovery

image on the right page to fit the modules more.

As you can see, by the updated spread, by

using a 3 column grid for both arguments

there is more of a sense of continuity within

the spread. The handglovery image also fills

out the modules more vertically, and I think 

this looks better visually. I chose size 14 for

the quotes as that is half way between the

point sizes of the headings and the body copy,

which I think fits the sense of hierarchy I want

to achieve quite well.