Message and Deliver Posters - Interim Crit

Today was the interim crit for the message delivery posters, but knowing that I have all day tomorrow to work on the project, I have done a lot of research in an attempt to ensure that my posters give the right sort of message and are in the correct tone. Because of this, all I presented in the crit was my initial 4 sketches of ideas for the image poster and an initial mock up of the three wise monkeys poster shown below in an attempt to get feedback on the concept.

What I Showed In The Crit

Unfortunately people didn't really give much useful feedback, although this was only to be expected due to the lack of context I included.  However, people commented that the concept of the 3 wise monkeys worked well with the style of illustration, and that the style of illustration was quite childish, which was what I was going for.

This means that tomorrow I won't really have much to go on during the development stages of my poster, but hopefully there will be people around me who's opinion I can ask throughout the day.